16.11.2013- This my first attempt at a double-page spread. This is the design based off of the rationale flat plan. It looks ok, but still a little unprofessional.
18.11.2015- 2nd attempt. This time I changed the font of the masthead, added slugs and banners, and edited the lighting of the photos to make them match the aesthetic theme of the page.
3rd attempt. I changed the font of the text from Verdana to Times New Roman, as I felt that the previous font made the page look too amateur.
25.11.2015- 4th attempt. I changed the masthead to the name of the model and also changed its font from Double Bubble to Lace Dreams.
14.12.2015- 5th attempt. I removed some of the rectangles and replaced them with lines. I also moved some of the text and slugs.
4.1.2016- 6th attempt. I changed the font of the masthead to Magic Sound to be consistent with the front cover. I separated the images and added illustrations to them to match the other pages. I added some more text in order to fill up the dead space.
6.1.2016- 7th attempt. By using the lasso tool I separated the image of the model from the rest of the image so that I could edit her alone. The variety of filters makes the page look more colourful and entertaining.
11.1.2016- 8th attempt. I removed the filters, as I felt that they made the page look too childish. I changed the masthead so it was lowercase in order to make it match the front cover. I added the article credit and changed the font of the photo credit.
13.1.2016- 9th attempt. I decided to change the colour of the background to make the page look more colourful and feminine. To make sure the masthead and sub-heading could be read I changed their colour. I changed the font of the sub-heading to match the feminine style of the page, and I changed the font of the slugs so that there would not be too many different font styles on the page.
18.1.2016- 10th attempt. I adjusted the size of the background so that a white frame would be created around the main article and images. This is so that the slugs are more visible and so that the main article looks more compact and appealing. The white and pink also contrasts with each other.
4.2.2016- 11th attempt. I changed the colour of the background to purple to be consistent with the front cover's colour scheme. I changed the font and colour of the last line of the text so that it matched the sub-heading.
8.2.2016- 12th attempt. I changed the masthead, added a pull quote, changed the font of the sub-heading, added a drop-cap and reorganised the main body of text. I am planning to perhaps add sub-images, to add shadows to the masthead and to obviously remove the guidance lines.
10.2.2016- 13th attempt. I added more text so that any dead space was filled up, and added a sub-image.
22.2.2016- 14th attempt. I realised that the main body of text was not in line with the page rulers, so I moved the paragraphs so they would not overlap the pages when folded.
29.2.2016- 15th attempt. I removed the coloured dots as I felt that they made the page look too feminine.
6.5.2016- 16th attempt. My lecturer felt that the page looked too feminine, so I changed the colour scheme. I changed the font of the masthead to match the font used on the cover, changed the font of the kicker and pull quote to make the page look less feminine, and added a caption to one of the images to anchor it.
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